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I asked
You said yes
And I believed you

I asked
That you never let go
But you never took my hand

I asked
That you always say hello
But you never say a word

I asked
That you look at me
But you only look through me

I asked
That you be here with me
But you didn’t want to be arround

I asked
You said yes
But it never happened

I asked
That you touch me
But you’re always to far

I asked
That you tell the truth
But you lie by just being

I asked
That you tell me your feelings
But you don’t even show them

I asked
You said yes
But it will never happen

I asked
That you tell me when it’s over
But you keep it going for no reason

I asked
That you spend your time with me
But you always make other plans

I asked
That you let me know
But I’m always left in the dark

I asked
If you loved me
©2008-2009 ~Yaoi-aloha
:iconyaoi-aloha:

Author's Comments

and you lied to my face.


i am taking the idea of the title twists from my fav writer. Chris i am sry i did not ask you but rereading ur work gave me a muse. so i had to write and it just came out this way. so sry again.

Din

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:iconchikatsu:
Your poems always seem to have a sad feeling to them and are always really powerful. Love it!

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No matter where you go, there you are :D

:D Smile, it confuses people :D
:iconyaoi-aloha:
thank you. its just what i feel about others. but its fun for me to express myself in this way

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Love?
:iconlostheartscombined:
i miss you so much now!!!!!!!!!!! :floating:
:iconlovesemoguys:
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i like this.

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*hitobitophotography
<333 gelie.
:iconankokuangel:
it's very pretty....

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:iconyaoi-aloha:
Thank you. it was a bad time when i wrote it.

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Love?
:iconyaoi-aloha:
really? that's new. why do you say that?

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Love?
:iconankokuangel:
i dunno... it's just that when ever i heard sad stuff like this I think that even though this person went through hell because of this person I get the idea that their better off without that person.... and just how you wrote it was pretty...

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